I made up some lyrics, so I'd like to hear what you think of them. It was inspired partially by Haiti and even just reading the newspaper! Comment on what you think!
Here it is:
This World
Lyrics by Sara Gorecki
I turn on the news and I wanna cry
There's so much wrong in the world passing by
Troops shipping out to fight in the war
None of them knowing just what's in store
A little boy's face appears on the screen
His parents are desperate to know if he's been seen
A dad lost his job & he's at a loss
Cause he can't pay what necessities cost
(Chorus)
This world... needs saved
There has... to be a way
The Homeless need shelter
The hungry need food
Orphans need parents
and God we need you!
An old woman's face catches my eye
And I read that she has recently died
She was one hundered and she'd been through alot
But what she believed in is what we've forgot
(Chorus)
This World... needs saved
There has... to be a way
The homeless need shelter
The hungry need food
Orphans need parents
and God we need you
Bridge:
Jesus, we need you
To show us your love
I know you have a plan
and I know it's enough!
(2nd Chorus)
This world... needs saved
And Jesus... is always the way
The Homeless find shelter
The hungry find food
Orphans get a father
When they trust in you!
(Refrain)
We need you, take a look around...
6 comments:
That was a great song! It really shows how much we need God and when we trust in Him, we don't need to worry about everything and it's all taken care of!
Sara, dear, that was BEAUTIFUL!!! I can't say more than that
Wow, Sara! That's so awesome!!! What beautiful lyrics...they sound so professional, like you have been writing songs for years!:) I have a friend who is a song-writer (kind of), so I have just recently been learning a thing or two about song set-ups. It tuley is an art!!:)Keep it up...you're doing great!
Sara, wow. That was really good! Have you put it to a tune? Again, great job!
Sara! I didn't know you wrote songs. As one that HATES to watch the news because it depresses me so, I can really relate to these words. I love it!
Mrs. H
Well, Miss Sara! I am quite impressed! Thank you for sharing!
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